Honestly, 1.5 stars. (Book club choice)
Un Lun Dun is Miéville’s foray into young adult fiction, and despite Goodread’s description, there’s little reward for adult readers of this one aside from a few small references to connections between some historic London legislation and this fictional, reverse of the city (either above or below the real London, it’s never very clear). My sense is that this narrative would be more suitable for ~8-13-year-olds, but would probably lose the interest of older teenagers. The language is intended to be adapted to a younger audience, but the tonal shift in dialogue or general stretches of inaction is awkward and overly self-conscious. The story establishes heavy-handed plot devices and shifts, and despite its notable length, the most interesting action is limited to about a third of the overall book.
Some concepts were interesting – the jungle house, the puzzle district, smog-animated corpses, utterlings – but the majority of this book demanded a considerable amount of attention for tedious over-explanation and patient endurance while one idea after another was vaguely attempted and then discarded. How a 500-page can seemingly change its mind about properly taking on a quest is beyond me.
I did find it interesting to consider whether Miéville had successfully retained his authorial voice and write a weird fiction / steampunk narrative aimed more for young readers with a comparatively leveled vocabulary, and it does seem like he maintained his familiar style, vision and creativity, but I’ll have a better sense of this when I do finally read the Bas-Lag series.